A RAP SONG (ATLEAST THAT'S WHAT I FEEL IT IS!), WRITTEN BY ME AND A CLOSE FRIEND OF MINE. PLEASE READ IT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF IT.
Whenever I read the paper or switch on da tv
I used to see people gone missin,
Some lost 4ever
Some still waitin,
Hoping there would be
Someone still searchin….
That's when I asked myself,
WHY CANT WE?
Stop all da chaos,
Stop the bloody war
WHY CANT WE?
Stop the meaningless fights
Try and do something right,
WHY CANT WE?
Try and make this world
A better place 4 u and me and try to
Open our eyes.
I see people
Get beaten upon the streets
With tears and blood
Flowing right through their eyes.
And I could see them
Pleading 4 help
Crying and screaming
Beggin to stop it all.
That's when I asked myself
WHY CANT WE?
Try and stop all da chaos
Stop the war
WHY CANT WE?
Stop the meaningless fights
Try and do anything right
WHY CANT WE?
Try and make this world
A better place 4 you and me
And try to open our eyes.
Whoa. how did u...write that? :P its lovely! :)
ReplyDeleteehm ehm! i'd love 2 hear sm1 singing it out 2 me! :P
ReplyDeletesure...when and where??!
ReplyDeletegud job...kiddo keep this up and we'll reach sum were
ReplyDeleteawesome composition bullu...keep goin..
ReplyDeletefor ur infmtn..this is taenaz here!